Snippet Sunday – September 22, 2013

Continuing with the first chapter of Once Upon Nowhere, Tori confronts one of her biggest fears — a lightning storm — and allows her mind to wander. Her mother has reassured her that this time they’ve found the place where they will be able to settle down. So why would she rather be anywhere but here? 

When their station wagon had turned onto a rutted road leading up to a dilapidated farmhouse, Tori knew in her heart it would never be the case. And no amount of coaxing, then or now, would convince her it was all for the best.

She buried her face in a pillow, pulled the covers over her head and squeezed her eyes shut. But her attempts to block out the night’s symphony were futile. She bolted straight up at the next deafening crack.

As Tori fretted the edge of a blanket, the beats between lightning and thunder decreased. It was close. The pounding of her heart melded into the steady sweep of rain on their farmstead.

A nearby strike lit the night sky for one brief second. Shadows scuttled to the forgotten corners of her room, which remained much the same as when she had crossed its threshold three months earlier.


6 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday – September 22, 2013

  1. Rayne Golay

    As a mood piece, this is great! Living in what is called the Capital of Lightning Strikes, I see the zigzag of the strikes, hear the deafening claps. A thunderstorm can be a terrifying, and you’ve shown her fear so well. Hope she’s safe.

    1. marenbraley Post author

      Thank you! I definitely don’t share that fear either. I have even stood outside during a hurricane! I’m completely fascinated by the power harnessed in a storm.


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